Feedback from first cut presentation by Mrs Allison

Amy, Perry and Marianna
First cut feedback

• Use of static at the start is a creative solution to your tape problem
• Love the whip pan – technique works well here – still don’t like Amy’s knee in shot
• Band location and lighting is effective
• Burning the photo sequence doesn’t work well – no drama. Consider a burning of effects on an outdoor barbecue
• The shot of the 2 girl singers in the garage goes on too long
• Lovely reaction shot from Becci when she drops the sim card
• Revenge would seem stronger if the sim card flushed down toilet!

Shots and pictures from filming music video

Amy's kitchen which Perry was filmed in whilst taking the Laxitives.

                        The stairs which we filmed Perry running down the stairs after taking the laxitives.

                                                                    Becci in the kitchen.

                                   Alanna next to the sink which we burnt the treasured possession.

                                         The garage where we filmed our garage performance.

                           The kitchen where we filmed Perry drinking the cup of coffee with laxitives in.

                                    Another shot of the garage where the garage performance is.

     This is where we filmed Amy Horsley and Becci Taylor when they did the bed performance.

 

                                             The shot which the computer scene was filmed in.

                                                      Becci in Alanna's brothers room.

                              Alanna's brothers bedroom where we filmed the room trashing scene.

                          Filming in the bathroom when the sim card is being thrown down the drain.

                                               Becci during the filming of the sim card scene.

                                      The sofa which we filmed amy singing her parts of the song.

                             Picture of living room where Becci's single shot performance was filmed.

Week events- 9th October

The filming for the 9th october was successful we managed to film all of the shots that we had planned.
When we started to edit we had relaised that we needed to get a shot of evidence that the room which we were trashing was a boy's room who they were getting their revenge on.
We will be doing it at a later date, along with other film which needs to be filmed again.
Which is the bed shot which was a master shot, we have planned to film it at a later date outside on Amy's stairs in her garden due to our teacher not particularly liking the lighting and movement which is in the shot.
We are confident that we will have all of our editing done for our due date.

Shots list and props- 9th October

Shot list:

Garaged performance- Becci Taylor, Amy Horsley and Alanna Petty the filming took place in Alanna's garage.
Burning of the treasured posession- It is photograph of a footballer, this was filmed in Alanna's kitchen.
Room trashing- Becci and Amy trashed Alanna's brothers room for the filming of this.
Paper being thrown in the air and cutting up the clothes- Was also been filmed in Alanna's brother room.

Props:

Paper
Clothing
Guitars
Matches
Photograph
Scissors

Week events- 4th october 2010

On the week of the 27th september we started editing our material and put it with the music.
In the week to come we are going to film more.
Were going to include our friend Alanna Petty who will be part of our band performance, she will also be part of our filming because Perry Allen and myself will not be available to help film in this session.
When we have got the material from the filming session we can start editing even more into our music video.

Week events- Shooting of music video 27th September 2010

For our first shooting we started between 3 till 6pm, we first did a master shot which ran through the whole music video. After we did this shot we weren’t happy with the way that the shot looked this is because there were lines going through the picture which meant re-shooting that whole shot was necessary.

After re-shooting we moved on to do shots which are going to be in the video to fill up bits which need to have imagery to them so that we don’t have the same shots we did one of Amy and Becci the two girls in the video if need to we then did the shots of Perry (running down the stairs and into the toilet which took us a few shots to perfect) one of them was of him having a cup of tea showing him drinking not knowing he took the laxatives.

We also did a shot of Amy and Becci on the sofa holding the box of laxatives implying they had put them in his drink.

Shot list and props for 27th September

Shot list:

Perry (Main boy) running for the bathroom- Laxitive shot
Perry Allen drinking laxatives in the Kitchen
Becci Taylor (Main girl singer) and Amy Horsley (other main girl singer) on the sofa showing the laxitives box
Becci Taylor typing on the computer in the study
Both main girls singers on the sitting on the bed in Amy's room


Props:

Laxitive tablets box
Computer
Coffee cup

Feedback for Animatic

The first shot that we had ideas of needs to be changed it isn't an interesting enough shot, it was going to be of Amy and Becci as a head shot of them up against the red wall. Instead of using our first idea for the first shot were going to use a shot of an escalator or lift with the guy and one of the girls, then one of the girls getting off the escalator/Lift and one of them getting on after the other has gone, this shows us first off that the guy is cheating on them both, which opens the music video well.
The Laxitive shot which has been included needs to be more distinctive and memorable.

Our teacher thought that the majority of shots we had planned to include in our music video were interesting and demonstrated our camera skills and editing skills well. Along with a good structured video.

Pictures of team members

Becci Taylors is the ex girlfriend and lead singer in this video, she gets her own back on her ex-boyfriend after finding out he had cheated on her.

Amy and Perry above they both play a part in the music video.

Amy is the other main female singer and perry is the boy who the two girls get their back on.

Above is myself who will be Filming the video and will also be appearing in the video as the new girlfriend.