Feedback for "The pitch"

When we showed the class "The pitch" we got feedback which showed us that we had to:
Show how we are going to utterly humilate the boyfriend in the music video.
We also needed to put pictures of stylistic influences and pictures of intended audience, after getting this feedback we added these photos to our powerpoint to improve it.

We also need to add photos of the location we are using for filming to the powerpoint which will be added onto the blog as soon as possible.

We also need stills for films or other music videos to show what editing techniques we will be using for our music video, this will also be added to the blog when i have found the editing techniques needed.